I sat and stared.
I stood. Transfixed.

As he spoke, his words hit me like electric shocks.
I could see how his enthusiasm made him stumble over words.
His dance-steps depicted his passion.

I wanted this.
I would exchange all the aloofness in the world
For a pint of his zeal.

Anyone observing me would have seen my longing
Alas, I coveted this fervor
This fire
That I saw in this electric young man.


  1. Dammie · Dec 1, 2016

    I’m not saying it’s ‘crushin’ o, but pls elaborate further. Who is this electric man e joor? (PS: I’m asking for purely educational purposes. To further my understanding of the text above.)

    • demilhadey · Dec 2, 2016

      Looool. Dammie. Its a guy I saw in church one. I cant even remember his name. 🙂

      • Dammie · Dec 2, 2016

        Lol. Ok o. I believe u.

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